Luka's Story

Luka was born in the country side where the cowboys were.when he was 3years
his father and mother told him to stay at home they will come back for 1min.
but they never came back.he was sad he was crying.at 20 he was a mafia criminal.He was robbing banks. He had his own men.One day the police caught him and tried to get him to the plane at 4:30 to LS. It was hard for police cause he had 10 trained men.It was 4:00 and his men where shooting at the police.
Then a Police officer told him his sad story. After at 4:30 when the plane arrived the police officer brougt him to the plane. when he got in the jail plane the officer got shot. Then Luka came out and his main guy gave him his ammo and his special pistol with a cross on it.Then he was angry at his main guy and all other people for shootig the officer.The officer was a good man to him.The thing that made Luka go to the plane was cause the officer told him that he would be famouse if he went in prison but he would.When he took his gear he shot all his men and the main guy was left. Luka aimed the gun at his main guy cause he shot the officer. He killed his main guy. He went on the plane alone without the police cathing him.When he came to prison he was 10years in prison after prison he wanted to join the police force he is waiting for an answer did he come in.

Strange story but it looks better if you start Sentence with big letter.
Good for first one.

I swear man every story ends up with the parents DYING. Though I suppose its reasonable so you don't have to have someone RPing an old person. Eatherway nice story...lol